Monday, January 28, 2019

Michel Houellebecq Hated Europe Before You Did



Michel Houellebecq Hated Europe Before You Did

The latest novel by France’s most famous author cements his reputation as a prophet of populism.

By Robert Zaretsky
| January 5, 2019, 2:53 AM
Michel Houellebecq attends an art show on June 2, 2017, in Manhattan, New York. (Eduardo Munoz Alverez/AFP/Getty Images)
With this week’s publication of his new book, Sérotonine, Michel Houellebecq has reinforced his reputation as France’s diviner of the dreadful. In 2001, his novel Plateforme, which climaxes with an Islamist terrorist attack on a Thai tourist resort, was published shortly before the 9/11 attacks. In 2015, the publication of Houellebecq’s Soumission, which portrays an Islamist political party taking power in France, coincided with the bloody jihadist attack on the offices of the weekly paper Charlie Hebdo.
Now, with the release of Sérotonine, France’s best-known writer since Albert Camus or Simone de Beauvoir has again written another best-selling novel that has also won critical admiration. But that’s not all. Houellebecq again seems to have once again hired the Zeitgeist as his publicity agent, this time in the guise of the provincial protest movement known as the gilets jaunes, or yellow vests. Though the novelist has not, unlike other figures on the right, championed the movement, he has earned the moniker of its “prophet.” This association, in turn, reinforces Houellebecq’s status, in the words of the newsmagazine L’Obs, as the “icon of extreme right” in France.
The backdrop to Sérotonine is rural Normandy, a landscape heavy with wintry mist and human misery. The local farmers, caught between the rise of international agribusiness and rules of the European Union, are as desperate as the livestock in the vast hangars dotting the fields. In a bleak description of an industrial chicken farm, Houellebecq notes that the “300,000 or so inmates, plucked and emaciated, struggled to live among the decomposing cadavers of their fellow chickens.” Upon entering these vast warehouses, the first thing one notices is the birds with a “look of panic and incomprehension, who don’t understand the conditions into which they’ve been heaved.” There is no need to be Roland Barthes to grasp this passage’s metaphorical link between the chickens and France’s farmers, plucked and desperate, unheeded by government officials and unseen by urban elites.
Sérotonine, by Michel Houellebecq, Flammarion, 352 pp., $25, Jan. 4,  2019 (France)
The novel’s protagonist, Florent-Claude Labrouste, lives in the Tour Totem—“a gigantic concrete mushroom”—that is one of the soul-numbing high-rises in the Parisian neighborhood Front de Seine, ground zero of the city’s dalliance in the 1970s with architectural brutalism. When Labrouste observes that the apartment has a “superb view,” Parisians know the catch: The view is superb because the Front de Seine cannot be seen.
Though he lives in Paris, Labrouste is often brought to the countryside by his work as an agronomist for the European Union. This profession happens to be the same one Houellebecq practiced before he turned his hand to writing, giving heft to his observations. A sympathetic observer, Labrouste is also powerless, unable to block the seemingly irreversible decline of traditional farming. “Where there are now slightly more than 60,000 dairy farmers,” he remarks, “there will be in 15 years 20,000. In short, what is taking place with French agriculture is a vast redundancy plan, but one that is secret and invisible, where people disappear one by one, on their plots of land, without ever being noticed.”
This sense of fatalism leads to the novel’s climax, a catastrophic clash between a group of striking farmers, who have barricaded a highway and are carrying hunting rifles, and a battalion of riot police. The confrontation ends with the death of several farmers, including their leader (and Labrouste’s only friend), who has the impossibly aristocratic name Aymeric d’Harcourt-Olonde. As one local resident gazes at the blood-soaked scene, he takes on the role of Greek chorus, shouting: “I say that they did the right thing! Things could not go on as they did, there are things that cannot be accepted. There are times when one has to do something.”
Since this is Houellebecq, there are yet other things that go on in this novel. “I will be reproached,” warns the narrator, “for giving too much attention to sex.” Indeed he does: Having scarcely cracked open the book, you encounter the first masturbation scene. Inevitably, the sex is either dreary, dismal, or both, ranging from loveless couplings to, yes, bestiality. No less inevitably, there is also what Houellebecq’s admirers call his political incorrectness, which his critics call his serial sliminess. Whereas Muslims have long been one of Houellebecq’s favorite targets, it is now women, often dismissed as “fat whores,” and gay people, referred to as “fags,” who take pride of place. Think of Louis C.K. with a Gauloise.
Yet crane your head above this mix of misogyny and misanthropy and you might catch an unsparing and unsettling view of the social fractures widening on both sides of the Atlantic. Christened in the German magazine Der Spiegel as “our era’s poet” and the French journal Challenges as the “ethnologist of the West’s decline,” Houellebecq seems to channel the discontents not just of those relegated to our social peripheries, but also to the well-educated elites hunkered down in the metropoles. Herein lies another, though elusive fracture: While the peripheries are subject to a material mal à vivre, or hard life, the metropoles are spiritually mal à l’aise, or ill at ease.
For Houellebecq, both sides of this divide are symptomatic of a yet another mal—namely, a mal du siècle. The phrase, coined in the early 19th century and popularized by the poet and politician François-René de Chateaubriand, pointed to the disillusion and disappointment that afflicted Europe’s literary avant-garde at the time. This odd malady resulted, in part, from the rise of science and technology and decline in traditional social roles and rituals. In a sense, this is also true in its current version, but our seemingly parlous condition is now measured by real or perceived threats to the collective identity of a nation. In the diagnosis made last month by the French budget minister, Gérald Darmanin, France has been seized by an “identity crisis.” It is as if France itself risks becoming one vast Front de Seine suffering from terminal anomie.
If there is something vaguely Spenglerian to all of this, it is because it is Spenglerian. An admirer of the author of the pessimistic and potted Decline of the West, Houellebecq was last year’s recipient of the Oswald Spengler Society Prize. According to the organization’s director, all of Houellebecq’s writings are “characterized by the intense pain of a society reaching its end without knowing how to defend itself.”
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Defend itself against what or whom? Elementary, my dear reader: the European Union. In his acceptance speech, Houellebecq declared he was less interested in the decline of the West than in its murder. By bringing its member states under a single set of laws, the EU “assassinated” them, Houellebecq concluded. To be sure, Houellebecq has never made a secret of his hatred for Brussels and all that it represents. As early as 1992, when France held a referendum on the Maastricht Treaty, Houellebecq voted against it; as recently as in this month’s Harper’s magazine, he praised U.S. President Donald Trump for his hostility toward the EU. In fact, Houellebecq mixed the banal and bizarre in his observations on America’s president. He declared that Trump thinks that Europeans “don’t have a lot in common, especially not ‘values’; and I call this fortunate, because, what values? ‘Human rights’? Seriously?”
Human rights, it seems, are not a serious subject for Houellebecq. Nor, for that matter, is Europe. In a statement both obvious and oblivious, he declared that “we in Europe have neither a common language, nor common values, nor common interests, that, in a word, Europe doesn’t exist, and that it will never constitute a people … simply because it doesn’t want to constitute a people.” While the first assertion is indisputable, the second and third claims are invidious. As the Brexiteers have discovered, Europe does indeed have common values and interests.
Nevertheless, Houellebecq’s conviction that the European Union “is just a dumb idea that has gradually turned into a bad dream, from which we shall eventually wake up” is but one reason leading figures on France’s ideological right idolize him. In 2017, the leader of France’s center-right Republicans party, Laurent Wauquiez, declared that he wished to “re-establish a dialogue” with right-wing intellectuals to make his party “a place to think.” He met with Houellebecq, who advised him that he needed to be “more transgressive” when it came to certain subjects. Shortly after, oddly enough, the party announced its new campaign slogan: “So That France Remains France.”
As for Marine Le Pen’s National Rally—the far-right party formerly known as the National Front—Houellebecq has kept his distance. Except, that is, when three sheets to the wind, he has run aground on these extreme shores. A few years ago, the translator Gavin Bowd revealed that, during an absinthe-soaked party in 2013, Houellebecq declared that he would call for a civil war against French Muslims and for voters to choose Le Pen. When Bowd protested that the then-Front National was indeed on the extreme right, Houellebecq waved him off, insisting the present party had nothing to do with earlier anti-Semites such as Édouard Drumont or Léon Daudet.
Though Houellebecq never followed through on his drunken vow, Le Pen nevertheless enlisted him to help make her party a place, well, to think. In 2017, among the books that National Front members were assigned for the party’s “summer university” was Submission. In an interview published by Valeurs Actuelles, a journal that promotes identity politics, Houellebecq set the tone for such right thinking. Warning that “civil war was in the realm of possibility” between Muslims and republicans, he suggested that Catholicism should again be made the official state religion. Only this, he insisted, would integrate Muslims into French society: “By occupying second place in a Catholic country as a respected minority, Muslims would accept their position much more easily than they do the current situation.”
Crucially, this kind of thinking has not made a dent in Houellebecq’s popularity. In fact, last week President Emmanuel Macron’s office announced that Houellebecq would be awarded the medal of chevalier of the Legion of Honor. He will thus join, among many others, France’s soccer team, the champions of last year’s World Cup, in being honored.
Of course, the medal is little more than a bauble. But as the man who created the Legion of Honor, Napoleon Bonaparte, remarked, it is with such trinkets that men are led. Or, in this case, misled. The irony is that the Legion of Honor, awarded to those who contribute to “ spreading the values and the culture of France,” will be given to a writer who insists he hears the death rattle of this culture, strangled at the hands of not just Brussels bureaucrats, but also French Muslims. Perhaps Macron is acknowledging that Houellebecq, though he will probably never be honored by the Nobel Committee as fellow contemporary French authors Patrick Modiano and J.M.G. Le Clézio have been, is actually read not just by foreigners, but also by French who live beyond Paris’s Left Bank. Or perhaps the president is instead doubling down on his remark, made in the national address he gave at the height of the gilets jaunes crisis, that France must reconcile the question of immigration with its “profound identity.”
Only Macron, who has been hailed as the last great hope for a liberal Europe, can answer this question. But what must French Muslims make of the bauble soon to be pinned to Houellebecq’s chest? For the journalist Claude Askolovitch, the banality of Houellebecq’s anti-Muslim bias gives him license to detest certain categories of Frenchmen and women for their beliefs, practices, and very being: “We can, without thinking, torment them with one phrase or another, or with a trinket. Their suffering does not count.” In this case, a dose of serotonin will hardly help France or the French.
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Wednesday, January 23, 2019

HOW TO LIVE LIKE SUSAN SONTAG

HOW TO LIVE LIKE SUSAN SONTAG
A LIST OF THE LISTS OF A GREAT THINKER
January 16, 2019  By Emily Temple Share:
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Free self-improvement idea for 2019: become Susan Sontag. Listen, it's not as hard as it sounds. If you watch all of her favorite films, indulge in all of her likes, avoid all of her dislikes, subscribe to her belief systems, adhere to her reading list, and follow her instructions for life, well, you'll basically have done it. And either way, you might have a very interesting year.

The easiest way to start such an undertaking is, of course, with Sontag's lists. She was a famously prodigious listmaker; her journals are full of them (though her son, who edited Sontag's journals before they were published, cuts some longer lists off partway through). In a journal entry dated August 9, 1967, she explains her affinity for the bulleted form:

I perceive value, I confer value, I create value, I even create—or guarantee—existence. Hence, my compulsion to make "lists." The things (Beethoven's music, movies, business firms) won't exist unless I signify my interest in them by at least noting down their names.

Nothing exists unless I maintain it (by my interest, or my potential interest). This is an ultimate, mostly subliminal anxiety. Hence, I must remain always, both in principle + actively, interested in everything. Taking all of knowledge as my province.

Relatable! If you too want to take all of knowledge as your province, or just want to know how much smarter than you Sontag was as a teenager, you can start here. Let me know how it goes.

Beliefs
This is the very first entry in Sontag's earliest published journal, dated November 23, 1947

I believe:

(a) That there is no personal god or life after death

(b) That the most desirable thing in the world is freedom to be true to oneself, i.e., Honesty

(c) That the only difference between human beings is intelligence

(d) That the only criterion of an action is its ultimate effect on making the individual happy or unhappy

(e) That it is wrong to deprive any man of life

[Entries "f" and "g" are missing.]

(h) I believe, further more, that an ideal state (besides "g") should be a strong centralized one with government control of pulic utilities, banks, mines + transportation and subsidy of the arts, a comfortable minimum wage, support of disabled and age. State care of pregnant women with no distinction such as legitimate + illegitimate children.

To Read
from Sontag's journals, December 19, 1948 (NB: she's 15)

There are so many books and plays and stories I have to read—Here are just a few:

The Counterfeiters—Gide
The Immoralist—"
Lafcadio's Adventures—"
Corydon—Gide

Tar—Sherwood Anderson
The Island Within—Ludwig Lewisohn
Sanctuary—William Faulkner
Esther Waters—George Moore
Diary of a Writer—Dostoyevsky
Against the Grain—Husmans
The Disciple—Paul Bourget
Sanin—Mikhail Artsybashev
Johnny Got His Gun—Dalton Trumbo
The Forsyte Saga—Galsworthy
The Egoist—George Meredith
Diana of the Crossways—"
The Ordeal of Richard Feverel—"

poems of Dante, Ariosto, Tasso, Tibullus, Heine, Pushkin, Rimbaud, Verlaine, Apollinaire

plays of Synge, O'Neill, Calderón, Shaw, Hellman . . .

[This list goes on for another five pages, and more than a hundred titles are mentioned.]

On Interpretation
from Sontag's journals, December 31, 1956

1. Nothing is uninterpreted.
2. To interpret is to determine, restrict; or to exfoliate, read meaning into.
3. Interpretation is the medium by which we justify context.
4. To interpret a word is different from defining it; it means to specify a range of contexts (not equivalents)

Rules + duties for being 24
from Sontag's journals, January 15, 1957 (the day before her 24th birthday)

1. Have better posture.
2. Write Mother 3 times a week.
3. Eat less.
4. Write two hours a day minimally
5. Never complain publicly about Brandeis or money.
6. Teach David to read.

Later, undated but "most likely late February or early March 1957":

DON'T

1. Criticize publicly anyone at Harvard—
2. Allude to your age (boastfully, mock-respectfully, or otherwise)
3. Talk about money
4. Talk about Brandeis

DO

1. Shower every other night
2. Write Mother every other day

Self-assessments
from Sontag's journals, 1957

What do I believe?

In the private life
In holding up culture
In music, Shakespeare, old buildings

What do I enjoy?

Music
Being in love
Children
Sleeping
Meat

My faults

Never on time
Lying, talking too much
Laziness
No volition for refusal

Parenting Rules
from Sontag's journals, 1958

1. Be consistent.
2. Don't speak about him to others (e.g. tell funny things) in his presence. (Don't make him self-conscious.)
3. Don't praise him for something I wouldn't always accept as good.
4. Don't reprimand him harshly for something he's been allowed to do.
5. Daily routine: eating, homework, bath, teeth, room, story, bed.
6. Don't allow him to monopolize me when I am with other people.
7. Always speak well of his pop. (No faces, sighs, impatience, etc.)
8. Do not discourage childish fantasies.
9. Make him aware that there is a grown-up world that's none of his business.
10. Don't assume that what I don't like to do (bath, hairwash) he won't like either.

Rules for Being a Writer
from Sontag's journals, December 3, 1961

The writer must be four people:

1. The nut, the obsédé
2. The moron
3. The stylist
4. The critic

1 supplies the material; 2 lets it come out; 3 is taste; 4 is intelligence.

A great writer has all 4—but you can still be a good writer with only 1 and 2; they're most important.

To Do
from Sontag's journals, February 20, 1977

Two experiences yesterday—lunch with Naipaul and reading Eikhenbaum's The Young Tolstoy—remind me of how undisciplined and demoralized I am.

Starting tomorrow—if not today:

I will get up every morning no later than eight.
(Can break this rule once a week.)

I will have lunch only with Roger.
("No, I don't go out for lunch." Can break this rule once every two weeks.)

I will write in the Notebook every day.
(Model: Lichtenberg's Waste Books.)

I will tell people not to call in the morning, or not answer the phone.

I will try to confine my reading to the evening.
(I read too much—as an escape from writing.)

I will answer letters once a week.
(Friday?—I have to go to the hospital anyway.)

Likes and Dislikes
from Sontag's journals, February 21, 1977

Things I like: fires, Venice, tequila, sunsets, babies, silent films, heights, coarse salt, top hats, large long-haired dogs, ship models, cinnamon, goose down quilts, pocket watches, the smell of newly mown grass, linen, Bach, Louis XIII furniture, sushi, microscopes, large rooms, ups, boots, drinking water, maple sugar candy.

Things I dislike: sleeping in an apartment alone, cold weather, couples, football games, swimming, anchovies, mustaches, cats, umbrellas, being photographed, the taste of licorice, washing my hair (or having it washed), wearing a wristwatch, giving a lecture, cigars, writing letters, taking showers, Robert Frost, German food.

Things I like: ivory, sweaters, architectural drawings, urinating, pizza (the Roman bread), staying in hotels, paper clips, the color blue, leather belts, making lists, Wagon-Lits, paying bills, caves, watching ice-skating, asking questions, taking taxis, Benin art, green apples, office furniture, Jews, eucalyptus trees, pen knives, aphorisms, hands.

Things I dislike: Television, baked beans, hirsute men, paperback books, standing, card games, dirty or disorderly apartments, flat pillows, being in the sun, Ezra Pound, freckles, violence in movies, having drops put in my eyes, meatloaf, painted nails, suicide, licking envelopes, ketchup, traversins ["bolsters"], nose drops, Coca-Cola, alcoholics, taking photographs.

Things I like: drums, carnations, socks, raw peas, chewing on sugar cane, bridges, Dürer, escalators, hot weather, sturgeon, tall people, deserts, white walls, horses, electric typewriters, cherries, wicker / rattan furniture, sitting cross-legged, stripes, large windows, fresh dill, reading aloud, going to bookstores, under-furnished rooms, dancing, Ariadne auf Naxos.

Best Films (not in order)
from Sontag's journals, 1977

1. Bresson, Pickpocket
2. Kubrick, 2001
3. Vidor, The Big Parade
4. Visconti, Ossessione
5. Kurosawa, High and Low
6. [Hans-Jürgen] Syberberg, Hitler
7. Godard, 2 ou 3 Choses . . .
8. Rossellini, Louis XIV
9. Renoir, La Règle du Jeu
10. Ozu, Tokyo Story
11. Dreyer, Gertrud
12. Eisenstein, Potemkin
13. Von Sternberg, The Blue Angel
14. Lang, Dr. Mabuse
15. Antonioni, L'Eclisse
16. Bresson, Un Condamné à Mort . . .
17. Gance, Napoléon
18. Vertov, The Man with the [Movie] Camera
19. [Louis] Feuillade, Judex
20. Anger, Inauguration of the Pleasure Dome
21. Godard, Vivre Sa Vie
22. Bellocchio, Pugni in Tasca
23. [Marcel] Carné, Les Enfants du Paradis
24. Kurosawa, The Seven Samurai
25. [Jacques] Tati, Playtime
26. Truffaut, L'Enfant Sauvage
27. [Jacques] Rivette, L'Amour Fou
28. Eisenstein, Strike
29. Von Stroheim, Greed
30. Straub, . . . Anna Magdalena Bach
31. Taviani bro[ther]s, Padre Padrone
32. Resnais, Muriel
33. [Jacques] Becker, Le Trou
34. Cocteau, La Belle et la Bête
35. Bergman, Persona
36. [Rainer Werner] Fassbinder, . . . Petra von Kant
37. Griffith, Intolerance
38. Godard, Contempt
39. [Chris] Marker, La Jetée
40. Conner, Crossroads
41. Fassbinder, Chinese Roulette
42. Renoir, La Grande Illusion
43. [Max] Ophüls, The Earrings of Madame de . . .
44. [Iosif] Kheifits, The Lady with the Little Dog
45. Godard, Les Carabiniers
46. Bresson, Lancelot du Lac
47. Ford, The Searchers
48. Bertolucci, Prima della Rivoluzione
49. Pasolini, Teorema
50. [Leontine] Sagan, Mädchen in Uniform

[The list continues up to 228, where SS abandons it.]
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Marcel Proust Was Almost Impossible to Edit


Marcel Proust Was Almost Impossible to Edit

Carol Clark on the Challenges of Editing and Translating The Prisoner

When Marcel Proust died in November 1922 only The Way by Swann's, In the Shadow of Young Girls in Flower, The Guermantes Way and Sodom and Gomorrah had been published; The Prisoner, The Fugitive and Finding Time Again were still in manuscript. But the phrase "in manuscript" gives a wholly inadequate idea of the task facing his original editors. Proust composed by an immensely complex process of writing and rewriting, weaving together passages sometimes composed years apart, filling his margins with additions and, when the margins ran out, continuing on strips of paper glued to the pages. (Some of the most memorable passages in The Prisoner, the death of Bergotte, for example, appear for the first time only in these last-minute "paperoles.") After a time he would have a clean copy typed, but this by no means marked the end of the rewriting process, which might continue to the proof stage and beyond.

As he never saw proofs of The Prisoner, the only thing of which we can be certain is that, had he lived to sign the bon à tirer (ready to print), the book would have been considerably different from the one we have now. All editions of it are based on three typescripts held in the Bibliothèque Nationale (now Bibliothèque de France) in Paris: the first quarter of the first typescript had been corrected by Proust before his death and further clean copies made, but it had not yet been given the bon à tirer. Consequently his first editors, the novelist and essayist Jacques Rivière and the author's brother Robert Proust, had to correct the rest and establish a text as best they could.

Later editors, Pierre Clarac and Andre Ferré for the editions de la Pléiade in 1954 and Jean-Yves Tadié (general editor) and Pierre-Edmond Robert (for The Prisoner) for the same house in 1988, have relied on the same typescripts, supplemented by an increasing quantity of manuscript material which has become available as collectors have died and left it, or their heirs have sold it, to the Bibliothèque Nationale. The distinguishing characteristic of the 1988 edition, from which this translation is made, is the inclusion of a large number of esquisses, preliminary sketches for passages which the assiduous reader can compare with the versions adopted for the main text. The Pléiade editions are scholarly in a way the original edition was not. Rivière and Robert Proust were more concerned to produce a readable text which would please critics and buyers, and so they ironed out a considerable number of inconsistencies and, as they thought, faults of style which the later editors have reinstated.

"He never tells you the age of the hero and on one page he is being taken to the W.C. in the Champs-Elysées by his nurse & the next page he is going to a brothel."

In the case of Proust, such editorial decisions are much more difficult to make than one might suppose. His composition is very rarely linear or chronological: most of the events described take place in a timeless or repetitive past indicated by the use of the imperfect tense. Only from time to time is an episode narrated in the past historic, indicating that it happened only once. (These alternative past tenses present a real problem to the translator.) In one paragraph the narrator can be years older than in the preceding one or, for that matter, younger. (Evelyn Waugh noticed this and facetiously complained to John Betjeman: "Well, the chap was plain barmy. He never tells you the age of the hero and on one page he is being taken to the W.C. in the Champs-Elysées by his nurse & the next page he is going to a brothel. Such a lot of nonsense" (letter, February 1948).)

Characters can be both masculine and effeminate (M. de Charlus), odious and kind (the Verdurins), corrupt and conscientious. For most of the time this is deliberate. Proust may be showing the passage of time (M. de Charlus is originally very masculine in his bearing, then becomes increasingly effeminate), or the complexity of human character (M. Verdurin bullies Saniette abominably and then supports him when he loses all his money, and it is Mlle. Vinteuil's friend, the very personification of depravity throughout the preceding volumes, who proves to have saved the composer's music for posterity by her patient deciphering of his manuscripts).

At other times the same characters can be seen differently by different people, either because some are more observant than others, or because they have had some particular revelatory experience. By the time of the Verdurins' music party, the narrator sees M. de Charlus as the caricature "old queen," no doubt partly because he has overheard his sexual encounter with Jupien at the beginning of Sodom and Gomorrah. But the more knowing members of the Verdurin circle share this view of him. On the other hand, the more conventional members of the audience have failed to notice his transformation, and the innocent young girl in Brichot's lecture audience sees only "a stout, white-haired man with a black mustache, wearing the Military Medal," and is disappointed that a baron looks just like anybody else. If Albertine says on p. 92 that the Verdurins have always been kind to her and tried to help her, on p. 313 that Mme. Verdurin has always been vile to her and then again on p. 379 that she has been kind, this tells us something about Albertine, and perhaps about human judgments in general. To eliminate inconsistencies like these would be completely to denature Proust's work.

On the other hand, when Brichot arrives, on p. 180, in a tram which by p. 183 is a bus, when Mme. Verdurin's husband is called first Auguste and then, a few pages later, Gustave, or when the vehicle in which the narrator and Albertine are riding through the Bois (pp. 149–158) is alternately a carriage and a motor-car, one wonders if Proust, had he lived, would not have eliminated such variations. Certainly, they are not found in the part of the manuscript that he did correct.

The most unnerving concerns Dr. Cottard. Mme. Verdurin is "deep in discussion" with him and Ski on p. 209, but at the same party she receives, without apparent surprise, condolences on his death (p. 221). By p. 257 he is alive again, and General Deltour is consulting him about his health. In the same way, two completely different accounts are given of the death of Saniette, its causes, the duration of his last illness and Cottard's involvement in it, though pp. 221 and 244 would suggest that the doctor had died before the patient. These inconsistencies no doubt result from Proust's practice of writing and rewriting sequences individually (again, rather in the way a film is shot), sometimes at considerable intervals of time and not in the order in which they would appear in the finished novel. It is difficult to see that such continuity errors serve any literary purpose, and his first editors eliminated them. Later, more reverential editors, however, have restored them all, including the death and resurrection of Cottard.

One might make the same observation about verbal repetitions, which are frequent in La Prisonnière, particularly in the part which Proust did not live to correct. Some of these are plainly deliberate, and represent tics of speech, like the Duc de Guermantes's "bel et bien" (here translated "thoroughgoing") or M. de Charlus's "enchaînement de circonstances." But others, including some whole sentences repeated with minimal changes, or sequences of two or more sentences all beginning with the same word or words (e.g. "D'autre part," "on the other hand"), are probably accidental. Such repetitions were regarded as very bad style at the time of the first edition, were often corrected by the first editors and have been reinstated by their modern successors. This translation has attenuated them to some degree.

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From The Prisoner by Marcel Proust, trans. Carol Clark. Used with permission of Penguin Classics.


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Tuesday, December 18, 2018

In These New Essays, John McPhee Finds Poetry in the Material at Hand

By Craig Taylor

THE PATCH 
By John McPhee
242 pp. Farrar, Straus & Giroux. $26.

Here is the seventh collection of essays by John McPhee, his 33rd book and perhaps his eleventy-billionth word of published prose. This far into a prolific career, it may be a good time to finally unmask the 87-year-old as a one-trick pony. In "The Patch," he again shamelessly employs his go-to strategy: crafting sentences so energetic and structurally sound that he can introduce apparently unappealing subjects, even ones that look to be encased in a cruddy veneer of boringness, and persuade us to care about them. He's been working this angle since the 1950s; it's a good thing we're finally onto him now.
Reading McPhee's back catalog prompts uncomfortable questions, like "Why am I suddenly compelled to know more about plate tectonics or the engine rooms of the merchant marine?" In "The Patch," it's "Why am I suddenly invested in McPhee's quest to pluck golf balls from local rivers using a telescoping rod called an Orange Trapper?"
At this stage in life, McPhee is no longer writing stories that take him hiking with blistered feet through the Glacier Peak Wilderness, and when he canoes, he paddles through "The Patch" of the title essay aware of his so far "uneroded" balance. He mentions cycling, but his exercise still seems to derive from sentence construction, prying out lazy words, rummaging through dictionaries and wringing suspense from unlikely moments, as when he extends his Orange Trapper. It "quivers, wandlike." He reaches and reaches and finally snatches up a golf ball before fleeing the approaching greenskeeper "at a speed so blazing that I probably could not duplicate it if I were to try now, but that was years ago, when I was 80."
McPhee finds surprising poetry in the material at hand, as in his list of found golf balls emblazoned with the names of mutual funds; the shanked Titleists of the 1 percent sink into his beloved Merrimack, Delaware and Connecticut Rivers. The Northeast has changed and is always changing, from the rivers to the pine forests to the earth's crust below. Nature, in McPhee's journalism, can only be preserved until it's threatened again.
So why is he interested in this telescoping rod? Why the 18-wheeled trucks of the title essay in his earlier book "Uncommon Carriers"? Why did he dedicate so many words to oranges in the brilliantly titled "Oranges"? "Compulsions are easy to come by and hard to explain," McPhee admits in this new collection. Over the years, with generosity, he's shared them. "I have never spent time with anyone who was more aware of the natural world." This is how McPhee described a mineral engineer in one of his finest books, "Encounters With the Archdruid,"adding, "He seemed to find in the land and landscape … an expression of almost everything he had come to believe about that world." With time, the description now shines back on its author.
"The Patch" is billed as a "covert memoir," but McPhee has smuggled excerpts from his life into most of his books. "When you are deciding what to leave out, begin with the author," he warned students in his recent writing memoir, "Draft No. 4." "If you see yourself prancing around between subject and reader, get lost." Never a known prancer, McPhee has instead drifted gracefully alongside his interviewees, in motion and in communion, in canoes and the cabs of trucks, listening with an almost obsolete respect to both sides of our various divides: to the mineral engineer and the environmentalist. "The Patch" is just another chapter in an ongoing memoir of generous curiosity.
It's McPhee's way to prod landscape and people until an avalanche of the verifiable tumbles into his notebooks. He is never one to simply walk through a meadow when the path passes "heather, lupine, horsemint, daisies and wild licorice." The color and fragrance of his writing could easily turn sickly if they didn't yield up the world with such precision, if they weren't deployed in the service of greater meaning.
Case in point: In the first and best essay in this collection, he vividly introduces the latest thing-you-didn't-know-you-cared-about: the chain pickerel, a fish with a "culinary quality … in inverse proportion to its size." As expected, McPhee describes an explosive "slime dart" that treads water "in much the way that a hummingbird treads air." But he ensures that the essay is as much about the legacy of his dying father. The image of a fish "as voracious as insurance companies, as greedy as banks" lingers like a splash, but the lasting impression is that of a patient lying in a hospital bed while his son tells him what he caught that morning with the old man's bamboo fishing pole.
About the only essay in this collection that McPhee can't elevate is an account of an N.C.A.A. lacrosse game pitting the University of Denver against Syracuse. McPhee is, thankfully, human in the face of a few daunting subjects. Even with his faultless sentences, research and structure, the subject remains, with earthbound obstinacy, a game of lacrosse.
The second half of the book comprises an experiment called an "album quilt," a montage of "fragments" of varying length from pieces done across the years, a mix of buffed and whittled snippets in which Joan Baez leads to Thomas Wolfe, and a profile of Barbra Streisand gives way to a disquisition on oared ships, and young Time magazine McPhee alternates with wise New Yorker McPhee. With 250,000 words available, McPhee says he cut 75 percent. He was left surveying a stack of heartwood.
For someone who filled his recent book on the craft of writing with diagrams of circles and arrows resembling halftime football strategies, "The Patch" is a departure. At first it looks like a revelation in looseness, as if McPhee had simply riffled through his voluminous back catalog. In his introduction to the album quilt, McPhee assures readers, "With 56 three-by-five cards on a large smooth table, I reached an arrangement of passages in an intentionally various, random and subjective manner." I accept the subjective; the random not so much. I'd believe him more if the book didn't end with two essays placed with intent. The first is a remembrance of Robert Bingham, his longtime editor at The New Yorker, a chance to convey Bingham's love for language and its finest practitioners. The second describes a journey to McPhee's beloved Alaska and the northern landscape's ability to broaden both a writer and a person. McPhee might like you to believe these two cue cards happened to cling together in a vigorous shuffle, but my hunch is that "The Patch" is surreptitiously structured, un-unplanned. After years of elevating his prose with patience and organization, the craftsman just can't help himself. I suspect it's all he knows.
Craig Taylor, editor of the literary magazine Five Dials, is the author of "Londoners."

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Friday, December 7, 2018

朱天文:在财富权势统治的实然世界,要奋力留下一些应然之物

朱天文:在财富权势统治的实然世界,要奋力留下一些应然之物


朱天文说,大学生的位置是"一个对声誉、财富、权势没兴趣,无利益,不参与的位置",他们评选出的奖项让我感到"格外新鲜难得"。
朱天文获颁"21大学生世界华语文学盛典"年度致敬人物
前日,由中国人民大学文学院、腾讯新闻、东方文学国际写作中心联合主办的"21大学生世界华语文学盛典"在中国人民大学举办,向台湾作家朱天文致敬。今年是该盛典举办的第二年,去年的致敬人物是哈佛大学东亚系暨比较文学系讲座教授王德威。
朱天文在现场发表了以《一个书写者的位置和时间》为题的演讲,探讨了"奖"与声誉的意义。"华语文学人物"的终评委员是21位人民大学创作班研究生,她认为这一点极为特殊,"在国内外我所接触过的各种文学奖,这是仅有的。"朱天文在演讲中说,"大学生站在一个干净清爽的位置上,汉纳·鄂兰(大陆译名汉娜·阿伦特)所说'没兴趣,无利益,不参与'的位置。是对甚么没兴趣,无利益,不参与?我回答大家,对声誉,对财富,对权势,"所以获得这一奖项"让我更感到光荣"。
从1972年创作首部小说《强说心愁》算起,朱天文的写作生涯至今已有近五十年。人大文学院教授、作家梁鸿在颁奖词里写到,一方面,朱天文"关注台湾复杂的政治历史构成和转型时期台湾人的生存状态和精神状态,她的小说里充满离散和乡愁",另一方面,她也始终对都市经验和性与性别议题保持关注,在写作中将个体精神的"荒凉与物的繁密结实构成强烈的反差",从赢得《中国时报》百万小说大奖的作品《荒人手记》到长篇小说《巫言》,无不如此。作家阎连科从这一奖项的性质和初衷——一年一届,推选一位对华语文学的写作、研究、推介有重要贡献的作家、学者或翻译家——出发认为,"第一届盛典我们致敬王德威先生,因为他对华语推广做出了巨大贡献。第二届盛典我们致敬朱天文女士,因为她的小说和电影让我们的华语、我们的方块字在世界上流传。"
在颁奖典礼当天上午,朱天文与人大写作班的青年作家们进行了交流。作为"活得久一点,多那么一些人生阅历"的写作先行者,她分享了五个与其写作生涯紧密联结的概念——"倾听"、"念念不舍"、"修复碎片"、"歧路花园"以及"抵抗时间,抵抗遗忘"。与同为作家、热心公共事务的妹妹朱天心相比,朱天文的风格常常被视为"云端散步,冷冷的在高处",但她认为,二人的写作属于"不同的抵抗姿态","和天心作品一半现实一半虚构的组合不同,我比较像卡尔维诺,沉重的现实是作品的基石,作品主体是虚构的内容。其实这是不同的抵抗姿态,但共同点在于'轻盈',不同于'飘飞',还是会受到地心引力的影响,与现实有距离但不至于太远,"朱天文在同作家班的交流中说。
"21大学生世界华语文学盛典"致敬朱天文

声誉:真正最该赋予声誉的,正是那些并不在意和喜欢声誉的人

写作近半世纪,朱天文一路获奖无数,从1976年《乔太守新记》获联合报小说征文奖、1994年《荒人手记》获首届《中国时报》百万小说奖,一直到2014年,她捧得了第4届美国纽曼华语文学奖。在剧本领域,她担任编剧的《悲情城市》《刺客聂隐娘》等作品曾数度入围台湾电影金马奖最佳原创及改编剧本奖。
但这次的"华语文学人物"评选仍让她感到"格外新鲜难得"。由21位大学生最终讨论和评定的奖项,究竟有何格外特殊之处?她引用汉娜·阿伦特的话,认为大学生的位置是"一个对声誉、财富、权势没兴趣,无利益,不参与的位置",并更加引申一步提出,"其实这个位置,大家驰骋一下想象,不正是上帝的观看位置,降落于人间,不就是史官,一个史官应然站定的位置。"
这里所说的史官的位置,指的是"自成一系甚至一代代相传的独立家族或学门,隔离于权势和财富之外不交流,唯以专业来工作"。朱天文说,"史官把原本纪实性的书史工作,加进了对错是非善恶的反省,改正了实然发生之事,成为一个'报称系统'。这是春秋之笔,乱臣贼子惧,帝王都怕的。"
从这一奖项延伸开来,声誉在今天意味着什么?在一个财富和权力如此密实的现实中,声誉有何种力量?她引用作家唐诺的新书《我有关声誉、财富和权势的简单思索》里的一则老笑话,将声誉比作一根绳子。
"你怎么会被官府抓去?"
"我拿了人家一根绳子。"
"才一根绳子也报官?"
"绳子另一头系着他们家的牛。"
朱天文说,"声誉是这根绳子,它本身也许毫无价值还带点做张做致,但它系着、系住很多有价值的人和事。"声誉亦有悖论,"真正最该赋予声誉的,也许正是那些并不在意、喜欢声誉的人,"声誉也时常暴露其脆弱、不确定和虚伪的一面,并且对财富和权势靠近或谄媚,但唐诺和朱天文都认为,我们仍应为声誉辩护并捍卫声誉这一象征"善"的能量和系统,"因为声誉单独地探向应然世界,联系着也相当程度决定着,我们对应然世界的必要思索,及其可能的数量、幅度、范畴和内容——简言之,那头牛。在财富和权势统治的实然世界里,我们奋力留下一些应然的事物。"

时间:以零叙事抵抗时间,以离题逃逸死亡

一直以来,"时间"是朱天文以写作抵抗的对象,也是她在写作中反复思考、不断回归的主题。
二十多年前,她在《荒人手记》的结尾写到:"时间是不可逆的,生命是不可逆的,然则书写的时候,一切不可逆者皆可逆。因此书写,仍在继续中。"如今回望,她在演讲中重申,"整本小说如果有主题,也许即是抵抗时间,抵抗遗忘。"
而在十年前的《巫言》中,她试图"实验一种有无可能的、能把时间变成空间的、一种'歧路花园'",希望以"零叙事"的写法把时间带入歧路和迷宫之中,"把推进的时间变成无与伦比的空间,流连其中,我们观之不尽、赏之不完遂而忘返。"
朱天文《荒人手记》《巫言》
这种先锋的写作尝试,既与博尔赫斯的短篇小说《歧路花园》有相通之处,也受到了卡尔维诺《写给下一轮太平盛世的备忘录》(大陆译为《新千年文学备忘录》)的启发。朱天文认为,卡尔维诺将"离题"作为一种写作策略,为的是繁衍作品中的时间并拖延结局,进而逃离死亡的捕获。
时间迷路之后,叙事停留在永恒的当下。朱天文对当下的专注以及由此而来的精准的文字风格,被王德威誉为"文字炼金术"。另一方面,她认为同位作家的父亲朱西甯也以"一个书写者的独特时间,和他绝无仅有的位置"实现了对时间的抵抗。
朱西甯八易其稿,在生命的最后十年里第九次开笔写作《华太平家传》,写了五十五万字未完。朱天文在题为《一个书写者的位置和时间》的演讲中说,"他是用我们这个'实然'世界的材料,在打造他心目中那个'应然'世界的熠熠梦土了。晚年的他,当他说'我是写给上帝看的'——为父亲不平的朱天心直接呛'你也太抬举上帝了!'但就在此刻,我亦才忽然明白,对这位专注打造梦土的书写者,时间也只好叹息着站在一旁。
朱西甯

苦劳:成功的故事不值得下笔,失败与废墟更有意思

眼下除了正在参与拍摄"在岛屿写作"系列纪录片《文学朱家》,朱天文也在写两本新书。在作家班交流的过程中,她透露说,"一个是长篇小说《在民国的黄昏里》,写的是我所经历的台湾的这半个世纪,也是写我的父母。另一本是散文集《只有一个人的叛事》,写的是我身边的在文艺圈的朋友们,他们都是'新天使',逆着潮流而行,去关注失败和废墟。"
在朱天文眼中,所谓"新天使",指的是一群逼视破碎的历史,把被进步的风暴摧毁的世界碎片拾捡、擦拭、分类,将它们修补成破碎而完整的事物的人。在她看来,无论是中国传统小说中盛极而衰的故事还是那些关于成功的故事,都不是值得下笔的事物,反而是那些被掩埋的失败、没有人遗补的废墟更有意思,也更值得写作者用心。
"写作者就是劳动者,在滔滔往前的人群里做一个呆在角落的人,这是我理想中的一个劳动的身影。"对待散佚在宏观叙事与线性历史中的细微琐碎,以及被所谓"真相"和"主流"遗忘的边缘人事,朱天文认为不仅要"盯",还要"盯得住",这是写作的基本功,与素描之于绘画的意义相似。"看两眼和看三眼四眼是不一样的。现在很多台湾年轻人的作品读起来,感觉他们盯两下就不想盯了,就走神了,这导致他们的作品也有些站不住脚。"这种勤恳的写作方式在某种程度上类似于人类学田野调查方法中的"蹲点",列维-施特劳斯是她最爱的作者之一,施特劳斯的代表作《忧郁的热带》被她戏称为"奶嘴书"(床头书)。
除了通过自我隔离来"专志凝神"于写作、像"山顶洞人"一样不用电脑也不用智能手机,朱天文还与青年作家们分享了其他一些磨练笔力的经验。"写作的续航,一是需要阅读,这是跨时空的功力培养与database的储备;二是需要生活历练,以一颗柔软谦逊的心去聆听;三是自省。你不能一直处在幸福题材的包围中,虽然去尝试新东西会有失败的风险,而且自觉性太强会削弱创造力,但我宁可这样。"朱天文说,"因为你知道你在尝试什么,你愿意往前去而非停留在已经成功的东西上面。突破的尝试可能是失败的,但这种失败也是有意思的。"

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